After uploading our 1st draft trailer on YouTube to find out what people thought of it, we realised from the mainly negative comments that there was far too much text in it preventing the attempt to build up of sense of suspension and instead seems to focus on storytelling through use of title sequence. We also noticed personally that the trailer only centres itself around only one particular scene/location making it quite dull and not really exploring the entirety of itself to the audience.
Taking in these comments about the trailer, we will attempt to edit it and incorporate a variety larger variety of scenes with a lot less words in-between cuts and are coinfident on producing something more practical and appriciative and instead of using the previous slow and progressivly styled track, we will be going with one with more energy.
In summary we intend to produce a trailer with;
- Less or no titles: We have learned from the feedback the overemphasis of storytelling through titles, the result of which bogs down the tension building.
- Fast paced: The track that we should use must have a steady and resonant structure.
- Storytelling: The most important element of a trailer is to put forward a story. When editing the film, we will replay it often to see if it tells a plot.
In summary we intend to produce a trailer with;
- Less or no titles: We have learned from the feedback the overemphasis of storytelling through titles, the result of which bogs down the tension building.
- Fast paced: The track that we should use must have a steady and resonant structure.
- Storytelling: The most important element of a trailer is to put forward a story. When editing the film, we will replay it often to see if it tells a plot.
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